I want to give you my overall impression of your work: I want you to know that you have a fantastic writing style. This piece is absolutely wonderful! An important aspect of poetry is attention to concrete detail.
You certainly have a knack for this! You write with such beautiful, condensed language. It affects emotion and thought on multiple levels through your use of symbol and imagery.
You make it easy for your reader to identify with your words. It is always easy to tell when an author spends time with their writing. I have to say that it is obvious that you have done a significant amount planning and preparation in crafting your work. Poetry is such a powerful type of writing!
You truly have crafted an excellent piece. Bravo!
We look forward to working with you on your book project. Congratulations again.
Manuscript Review Team
Outskirts Press, Inc.